Monday, October 4, 2010

Article of the Week #7 (week of 10/4-10/8)

Here is the link to the AoW for this week. 

READ THIS FIRST

this is a current event article about the murder of a young LOCAL teenager. This story has been on they news daily for the past week or so. If this is a problem for you, let me know and I will assign an alternate article.

Again, please answer the questions in complete sentences in paragraph form for full credit.

30 comments:

  1. kayleer6
    The title of the article is 'Authorities identify teenage girl whose burned body was found Sunday near Santa Margarita'. the article came from mewspapers and blog post. the Author of the article is AnnMarie Cornejo. The article was published on Saturday, Oct. 02, 2010. The pupose ofthe article is to let people now whats going on around them and who was being killed,why, when, where, and who killed her. the Atended Audience for this article is anyone who new the girl or lived near her or who reads the paper or watched the local news. The main idea of the article was how the young girl got killed and what the police are doing to the guys that killed her. i think the article was intresting and sad.

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  2. AlfredoA5

    The title of the article is called "Authorities identify teenage girl whose burned body was found Sunday near Santa Margarita". It came from a newsletter and was published on Saturday, Oct. 02, 2010 by AnnMarie Cornejo. Its purpose is to inform the reader of what has happened to Dystiny Myers. The intended audience is to teenagers and adults. The main idea is what happened to Dystiny Myers. The supplorting ideas are who are her killers, where her body was found, whats going to happen to her killers, and trying to find out why she was killed. I think that she should not have been killed but she still had her whole life in front of her. Her killers should have known better because they were older and they had no righyt to do that. Its just wrong.

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  3. published oct.2,2010
    newsletter
    main idea and purpose is to infrom people on what happends in other countries.supporting deatials a girl gets murdered in onther sate . attent adunice the parents and any one who read this. my comments on this article is that i felt bad for her parents imagine how they fell this article is really sad and i didnt like it.
    marleneg p4

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  4. Samw5

    "Authorities identify teenage girl whose burned body was found Sunday near Santa Margarita", was an article/news headline posted by AnnMarie Cornejo on Saturday, Oct. 02, 2010 on SanLuisObisbo.com. The article was written to alert people who the people were that killed Dystiny Myers. It also told people that Dystiny is from Santa Maria, and that according to her myspace, she is a heavy drinker. I remember hearing about the murder on the news and I was saddened that someone would do that. I am happy the people that did it are going to jail without bail. But now, I have mixed feelings because the myspace of the girl said she was a heavy drinker. But still, murder is a terrible thing.

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  5. jv5


    “Authorities identify teenage girl whose burned body was found Sunday near Santa Margarita” is a title of an article in the San Luis Obispo Tribune on October 2, 2010 written by Ann Marie Cornejo. The article was written so that people in the Central Coast could be updated about a horrible murder that had taken place. The article says that a group of five was arrested for murdering the girl. All the people arrested said that they were not guilty. They are in jail without bail. The will go to court on October 15, 2010. I had read an article about this in the Santa Maria Times. It said that the girl murdered had been a girl who went to church and was very involved in her youth group. Her grandmother said that this last year, she got involved with drugs. My family talked about how quick things can change.

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  6. On Saturday, October 2nd, 2010, the burned body of a fifteen year old local girl from Santa Maria was found near Santa Margarita. Five people were arrested for being involved with the murder. The article was written by AnnMarie Cornejo and published in the Tribune. The article was attended for the people of Santa Maria and neighbor cities. I think the newspaper shouldn’t have put those things about her myspace profile; it was incredibly ignorant and insensitive to her and her family. Strangers shouldn’t know her business. Its hers and no one else’s. I blame the meth-heads that did it and her life style and her poor decisions (mostly the tweekers).

    Arek P.

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  7. EloisaT4
    Oct. 7, 2010

    The title of this article is "Authorities identify teenage girl whose burned body was found Sunday near Santa Margarita" by Ann Marie Cornejo. This came from a blog post and it was published at Oct. 2, 2010. The purpose of this article is to inform the reader what happened to the teenage girl. The intended audience for this article are for teenagers and adults. The main idea of this article is that to share the story about a body that was found 6 miles east of Santa Margarita. My reaction/thoughts about this article is that i think its really cruel and devastating to what the suspects did to this girl.

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  8. Brenda G. 6

    This artical is called 'Authorities identify teenage girl whose burned body was found Sunday near Santa Margarita.' The author of this article was AnnMarie Cornejo. It was published Saturday, October 02, 2010. The Main idea of this article is to talk about the girl whose burned body was found on Sunday. The purpose was to inform readers about the five people that are suspected to be the killers of 15-year-old Dystiny Myers. The author uses supporting ideas by giving information about where and when the body of the young girl was found. I think thats horrible what they did to the young girl.

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  9. CoryG5
    "Authorities identify teenage girl whos burned body was found Sunday near Santa Margarita," was written by AnnMarie Cornejo on October 2, 2010. The article was written for a 15 year old local girl who was murdered, and burned. It was made for mainly teenagers and adults. This girl was brutaly murdered, by what they think to be as 5 guys. She still had much life to live, and was cut short because of some sick group of people. She was a Normal Teenage girl who loved her friends and having a good time. I think it is disturbing to think that a group of people would be so sick as to kill a innocent girl, who hasnt even seen the world yet. She will be missed by many, R.I.P.

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  10. Sarah Stevens. Period 4

    Authorities identify teenage girl whose burned body was found Sunday near Santa Margarita is the title of this article by AnnMarie Cornejo. This article is from The San Luis Obispo Tribune. The date this artcile cam out was Saturday Octboer 2, 2010. The purpose of this article os to inform people. The intended audience is people who watch/read the news. The main idea of this article is that a girl got burned to death and murdered. The supporting ideas are that there are 5 suspects included in the murder, her body was found in Santa Margarita, she is from Santa Maria, and she did drugs, alcohol and partyed a lot. When I was done reading this I was scared, I didn't know what to think and it's really sad what happened to her. Why would people do that?!

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  11. WhitneyH6

    The title of this article is "Authorities identify teenage girl whose burned body was found Sunday near Santa Margarita" by Antonio A. Prado. This article was posted on October 2, 2010 on The Tribune of SanLuisObispo.com. The purpose of this article is to inform the reader of the girls death. The intended audience are family, friends, and anyone interested in the death of the girl. The main idea is that a bad life can really mess you up and lead you to death. My reaction after I read this article was shocking, because I used to go to church with this girl when we were both just toddlers.

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  12. YeseniaP 6.
    The article "Authorities identify teenage girl whose burned body was found Sunday near Santa Margarita" was written by AnnMarie Cornejo. The article was publised Saturday,October 2,2010. The purpose of this article was to inform what can happen to you if you do drungs,or drink alcohol how it screws you up and what people can do to you.The inteded audience is mainly teenagers because what you do and post on the internet can leade to serious consequeses.The author uses supporting details explaining what happened and where exactly she was found.I think that it teens shouldn't be allowed to post things like that because then people would try to kill them.

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  13. DaisyC4
    Oct.8 2010


    "Authorities identify teenage girl whose burned body was found Sunday near Santa Margarita" is on the muder of 15 year old Dystiny Myers. The writer was by AnnMarie Cornejo & was published on October 2, 2010 . The purposes for this acticle was to tell the tragic murder of this pooor girl. The intended audience was for everyone ; kids, parents, friends, & anyone ! The main idea was for everyone to knoe aboutt the murder of Dystiny Myers. I think it was a tragityy on her murder , she didnt deserve that . My first reactions was that i couldnt believe that this girl whos my age got killed i was so upset about itt . Whatever happens to the people involved with the murder deserves whatever they gett for killing this little girrl

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  14. AndrewA6


    Authorities identify teenage girl whose burned body was found Sunday near Santa Margarita posted on Oct. 02, 2010 by AnnMarie Cornejo. To explain a death of a local and tell us how why she died. To get information out to the public about the invesitgation. It tells us who were arrested for the murder and what are there going to do next.

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  15. hydeel6

    This weeks article was "Authorities identify teenage girl whose burned body was found sunday near Santa Margarita" was in Newsletters-Breaking News::Major by Annmarie Cornejo on October 2nd 2010.This article is intended for pretty much anyone who wants to read it.Its purpose was to inform anyone about this tragic inncident.The main idea was to tell about the murder of Dystiny Myers.I think this is a sad and upsetting situation and i have no further comment.

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  16. this week article was "authorities identify teenage girl whose burned body was found sunday near santa margarita" was in newsletters beraking news major by annmarie cornejo on october 2nd 2010.this article is intended for anyone who wants to read it . it purpose was to inform anyone about this trajic inccident


    valen b 6

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  17. CynthiaB4
    The title of the article is "Authorities identify teenage girl whose burned body was found Sunday near Santa Margarita" by Annmarie Cornejo posted on the 2nd Of October. This article was about the trajic murder of a 15 year old girl by the name of Dystiny Myers. This Article was to inform the audience about a tradgedy that had occured recently. The intended audience is for everyone. I think is was a very sad story.

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  18. Marleneg4 this is a response to Areck P
    i think that your right because i was thinking the same thing dude. i think your right cuz they have no right to be in her pirvate life. and the tweekers part wow

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  19. DaisyC4
    November 16, 2010

    My comment is in response to WhitneyH6 beacause i think her comment was goood and it stood out to me cause she actually knew this poor girl and it sounded reallly sad to me that she knew this girl. They use to go to church together when they were little and i was just thinking they probley were friends and ive lost a friend before and it hurt me soo much. This article is one of my favorites and her comment was really good just cos she was really specific about her stuff and her info.

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  20. Sarah S.4
    This is a response to WhitneyH6's comment. I agree with you it is sad and cruel that she died especially if you used to go to church with her that makes it a little more personal if you really knew her. I do think you could of changed your intended audience because you said "The intended audience are family, friends, and anyone interested in the death of the girl." and I think that you could have left out "anyone interested in the death of a girl" it's sad. Instead you could have maybe put "people who are interseted in news." Anyways I thought you worded your paragraph well and followed the instructions.

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  21. WilliamJ4
    The title of this article is "Authorities identify teenage girl whose burned body was found Sunday near Santa Margarita" by Antonio A. Prado. This article was posted on October 2, 2010 on The Tribune of SanLuisObispo.com. The purpose of this article is to inform the reader of the girls death. The intended audience are family, friends, and anyone interested in the death of the girl. The main idea is that a bad life can really mess you up and lead you to death. My reaction after I read this article was shocking, because I used to go to church with this girl when we were both just toddlers.

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  22. @Arek P.

    I can agree with this completely. The fact that they posted her full name was enough, They should have just left it with Destiny M. so people wouldnt burden her family. Putting how she was a heavy drinker made it worse by making it seem like her parents arent being good parents. The newspaper should have got permission from the family before they did any of this. It is truley tragic what happened to this girl and it is completely wrong for the newspaper to post all this information about her and by giving all this information to the public.

    JasmineB5

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  23. Erik A5
    I am responding to the article of the week #7 by Arek P5. He did this article on the burned body of a 15 year old girl named Dystiny Myers. Her body was found in Santa Margarita but she lived in Santa Maria. It was very sad about what had happened to her.

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  24. response to Arek P.

    I agree with your commet. No one should know her busniess. they didnt need to say she had her myspace or anything like that. the people that killed her should be in jail for life. the Meth-heads who made her like that and made poor decisions should go think about what they did and pray because they put her threw a lot of stuff she shouldent have been in.

    MiaE5

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  25. Brenda G. 6 In response to AlfredoA5

    I agree with you Alfredo. That girl still had her whole life in aheaf of her. The murderers had no right to kill her. They most likely didn't even have a reason to do it, and even they did have a reason it still wouldn't be right.

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  26. WhitneyH6

    This comment is in response for Hydeel6. I think her comment was to the point and explained what the article was about. I chose her comment, because it explained how tragic the girls dealth was and how Hydee didn't have much to say about it. She felt for the girl and that just makes the comment all the more meaningful.

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  27. CameronE6
    responding to SamW5
    I feel as if Sam was using too much information and could have shortened his passage.

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  28. Jennifer P.6 Response To AlfredoA5

    He finished all his questions and he was giving enough details for the article of the girl who got murdered. I also think that murder is a wrong thing .

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  29. Sarah S. p.4
    "Authorities identify teenage girl whose burned body was found Sunday near Santa Margarita" is the title of this article by Ann Marie Cornejo. This article is from The San Luis Obispo Tribune. The date thsd article came out was Saturday October 2, 2010. The purpose of this article is to inform people. The intended audience is people who watch/read the news. The main idea of this article is that a girl got burned to death and murdered. The supporting ideas are that there are 5 suspects included in the murder, her body was found in Santa Margarita, she is from Santa Maria, and she did drugs, alcohol and partied a lot. When I was done reading this I was scared, I didn't know what to think and it's really sad what happened to her. Why would people do that?!

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  30. jaredc5
    the title of the article is "authorites identify teenage girl whose burned body was found Sunday near Santa Margarita" by Annmarie Cornejo . it was posted on October 2,2010 on the tribune of sanluisobisbo.com. it is about the girl who was killed and burned. the intended audience was everyone. it is sad that she was murdered.

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