Sunday, March 20, 2011

Article of the Week #8

This is the newest article of the week. I am very happy that some of you are joining the party and doing your work, and that most of you are really starting to demonstrate much better writing of your ideas. Enjoy, this is written by one of your colleagues!

30 comments:

  1. Samw5
    "Homecoming: A Green Day Concert Review" is a concert review by SamW5. He is talking about a concert he went to and said how awesome it was. This review is aimed toward concert goers and green day fans alike. I really truly loved the article. It is probably the best AoTW there ever was. This guy is a true genius and he really makes a true masterpiece when it comes to concert reviews.

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  2. "Homecoming: A Green Day concert Review" is an article that was written by Sam W6. It is about how he [samw6] went to his very first Green Day concert with his mom and how they both really liked it. He thought it was very enjoyable except for all the smoking and the fact that they didnt play any of their old songs.I personally dont like this article beacuse this is just about his life experience. This is intended for anybody who has not ever been to a concert before and giving them an idea of what its like.
    MerO5

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  3. alisong6

    "Homecoming: A Green Day Concert Review," was written by one of our very own, Righetti High School students, Sam Wellard. Sam posted a review about Green Day on Google.com. The review was posted not only for just Green Day fans, but also for people who either love to have a good time at a concert and/or for people who love to listen to music. Sam wanted to convince you to go see Green Day, live in concert, and he made sure to explain his experience in detail. For example, he tells you that Green Day played a lot of their hit songs. I think that Sam did a good job on explaining how much fun he had at the concert, and he made me want to go the next concert Green Day has close by.

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  4. NicolasB5

    The title of this article is "Homecoming: a Green day concert review", the purpose is to inform people of what the concert was like. The intended audience is anyone interested in Green Day. The main idea is what happened at that concert. The supporting ideas are the Pros/Cons. I think this is a good review because it tells the good and the bad things about it.

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  5. MirandaA5
    This weeks article was written by Sam Wellard my classmate,it's titled "Homecoming: A Green Day Concert review." He describes his time at the Green Day concert and his review.He had Pros and Cons about the concert. The good part about it was the stage, and just their performance, the bad things were they should've played more of their old songs, they left out a lot and people kept smoking. This article really explained his time there and i thought it was alright. It sounds fun,even though i don't really like their music.

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  6. AlyssaB 5

    The Article of te Week for this week was written by my classmate Sam Wellard. It doesn't say when it was written or where it came from for that matter. He wrote this article on the Green Day concert, him and his mom went to together. He wrote this to show people that he really enjoyed going to a Green Day concert, and it was a very memerable time. The audience he is projecting his article to is all ages of adults. According to Sam, even if you don't like Green Day, you should still go see them because they're amazing! Ever since i read this article i actually do want to go see them in concert now. Sam is a really good persuader and persuaded me to go and see them. I think one of the coolest parts of this article, is that it was written by one of my classmates. That to me is insiring in itself.

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  7. jessicaV5

    The essay called “Homecoming: A Green Day Concert Review,” by Sam Wellard, is about his review on seeing Green Day in concert. The intended audience is fellow students, or Green Day fans. He wrote about the pros and the cons of the Green Day concert. For the pros, he said that the stage was amazing. It had a giant monitor on the stage that was the shape of buildings. He also said that they played “a heck of a show.” For the cons, he said they left a lot of good songs out. He said that he wanted them to play more of their old songs. Overall, I think that it would be really fun to see a concert, even though I don’t like the band. I have gone to one concert and it was really fun and exciting.

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  8. CodD5

    Title: Homecoming: A Green Day Concert review

    Author: Sam W6

    Intended Audience: Teenagers

    Meaning: He is showing how much fun he had at the Green Day concert, and saying even if you don't like Green Day, you should still go and see them. As they "put on a heck of a show".

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  9. kristenc5

    this weeks article is called "Homecoming: a green day concert review." the auther was samW6. the main idea is to show people and tell them how good a green day concert was. in the artiocel it really showed how much fun he had at the concert.the intended audience is anyone who goes to concerts o r just like music. my thoughts on this is that you could tell that he really had a good time at his fave bands concert. and that if you like greenday this would be a good reivew

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  10. KayleeR6
    This weeks article is Homecoming: A Green Day Concert review. The author of this article is By Sam W6. This article has no published date.The article shows that the pros and cons about the concert and the overall ideas about the concert.

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  11. JasmineB5


    This article was called "Homecoming: A Green Day Concert review" it was written by Sam Wellard, a former student from Righetti high school. It was a google document and had no exact date of when it was posted. The purpose of this article was to tell people about how great Green Day concerts are. This inteneded audience was towards Green Day fans and this article was ALL about a Green Day concert (lol just read the title). The Write uses a lot of exampled on why you would want to check out a Green Day Concert. Overall i thought it sounded pretty interesting even though i am not a fan of Green Day myself

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  12. Jonathan B5

    This weeks article was "homecoming: A Green Day Concert review." It was written by Sam Wellard the purpose of the article is to tell the reader what kind of show Green Day puts on. The intended audience is anybody interested in concerts. The maind idea is to convince you to go see a Green Day concert. This article was very interesting but I don't see myself going anytime unless it is free.

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  13. AlfredoA5

    The title of this weeks article is called "Homecoming: A Green Day Concert review." It was written by Sam Wellard one of my fellow classmates. The purpose of the article is to try to get you to go to a Green Day concert. The intended audience is people who enjoy concerts or Green Day fans. The main idea is to try to convince you to go to a Green Day concert. I thought its pretty cool that one of my classmates wrote this and I would go if its free.

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  14. MattRey5

    This AOTW was written by Sam Wellard. It doesn't say when it was written or where it came from for that matter. He wrote this article on the Green Day concert, he went to with his mom. He wrote this to show people that he really enjoyed going to a Green Day concert, and it was a very memerable time for him. The audience he is projecting his article to is anyone. Sam says even if you don't like Green Day you should still go see them because they are good. my thought are.. hmm. I think its really cool that Sam wrote this. But i dont like green day, they just got too old, and isnt really my type of music anymore.

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  15. KaileyR5
    the title of the article is "Homecoming: A Green Day Concert review: it was written by Sam Wellard. the purpose of the article is to tell you about how Green Day concerts are. the intended audience for this article is every one that can read, but mostly Green Day fans. the article has no date of when it was posted. i ythoug the article was good and had a lot of example of why it would be fun to go to a Green Day concert

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  16. "homecoming: A Green Day Concert review" is a very well written article by Sam Wellard. It is about Sam's great experience at his favorite band's concert. It is intended for Green Day fans, and persuades you into going to one of these concerts. It sounds too me like they throw a great show, but personally i dislike this band.

    jasent5

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  17. ColinC5

    "Homecoming:A Green Day Concert review," by Sam Wellard realy did a great job in explaining his experiance at the Green Day concert. Its purpose was to convince people to go see a Green Day concert. It was designed for Green Day fans or possibly anyone intterested in seeing one of their concerts. After reading this article it definitely makes me more interested in seeing a Green Day concert.

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  18. "Homecoming: A Green Day Concert Review," by Sam wellard is what he thought about a green day concert he went to. He thinks that if u dont like them that you should see them. I personally am not a fan of Green Day and I think they suck.
    CameronE6

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  19. the article "Homecoming: a green day concert" written by Sam Wellard was about Sam and his Mommy going to a Green day concert together and having a good time. the intended audience of the article is anyone who would be interested in going to a Green Day concert. i think that my brother and Sam would be really goode friends because my brother likes Green Day alot.



    austinh5

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  20. Judiths5

    "Homecoming: a green day concert"

    Sam Wellard

    Sam took his mom to a concert by green day. This was an article made to have people be more interested in green day.

    This article was made for people who want to kind of know more about green day.

    This article wasnt really for me because Im more into hip hop and r and b.

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  21. Yesenia P.6
    The title of the article is "Homecoming: A Green Day Concert," written by a Righetti High School student Sam Wellard. The article was about Sam and his mother going to a Green Day concert and it being an amazing show.The main idea is how much fun a Green Day concert can be.The intended audience is mainly for Green Day fans but also people who are interested on going to a Green Day concert. My thoughts towards this article is that is well told and, that it tells about the pros and cons.Also, it interested me into going to a Green Day concert or a concert in general.

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  22. PorscheR6

    The title of this article is "Homecoming: a Green day concert review", the purpose is to inform people of what the concert was like. The intended audience is anyone interested in Green Day. The main idea is what happened at that concert. The supporting ideas are the Pros/Cons. I think this is a good review because it tells the good and the bad things about it.

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  23. sethc6
    The article of the Week is titled "Homecoming; A green day concert" written by Sam wellard. This article is about Sam and his mom going to a green day concert with eachother and having fun. this article is to anyone who would be interested in a green day concert. i think that if my mom invited me to a green day concert i would definetly go.

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  24. AlexandriaH6

    the article is called Homecoming: A Green Day concert Review. It was written by Sam Wellard. It is about how sam went to his very first Green Day concert with his mom and how they both really liked it. This is article is intended for anyone who has never been to a concert before and is giving them an idea of what its like. i like this artcle because ive never been to a concert befoe and i woulnd of known what to exspect

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  25. the name of this article was "Homecoming:A Green
    Day Concert Review", by SamW5. this article came from googledocs.com. The purpose was to review the Green Day concert. The inteneded audiece was to people who like Green Day and wanted to know how their last american tour date concert was. The main idea was to spread the word the Green Day has some amazing concerts. He described everything very well the whole time i was reading this article i could practically vision everything for myself.
    angelinav5

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  26. AndrewA6

    The article is called "Homecoming: A green day concert Review" by quad man SamW5. It is about Sam's first Green Day Concert with his mother and how much he enjoyed himself there. This article is intended for either people who wants to go to see green day or a concert.

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  27. tyleri5 The article is called Homecoming: A green day concert review. It was about same going to a green day concert with his mom and the songs green day played. The intenden audience is any body wanting to know about green day.

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  28. SelenaC6


    The article is called "homecoming: A green day concert REview." by Quad man Samw5 posted by a site called googledocs.com. The purpose of this article is to review the Green Day concert with his own mother and explain how great it went. The main purpose is his opinion of this band. The intended audience are Green Day fan's who would like to no how there concerts are. My opinion of this article is it's whatever i never liked Green Day though.

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  29. RobertG6

    The title of this article is called "Homecoming:A Green Day concert review".this article is about a person going to a Green Day conert and listining to some good songs by the band. Green Day played old songs like "Highway to Hell" and a few others. the crowd pulled out lighters when the band started to play "21 Guns" (<-- good song). this article is recomended to people that like reading about concert rewiews and people having a good time at concerts. this article is also telling you to go to a greenday concert.

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  30. sethc6

    The title of this article is called " Homecoming: A green day concert review." written by Sam Wellard. this article cam from googledocs.com. this article is about Sam Wellard going to his first Green day concert. the intended audience is to basicly anyone who is intrested. i like this article because i know sam wellard and i like green day.

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